Micropoem #107 – Commuter

There was a blind one, who pedaled rainbow light strings, and caned the train on colored fire.
A family of out of town smiles made out with two strands for two kids playing unruly lasso with the poles.
And we edged indifferent away from those interacting with the scenery.

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One Response to Micropoem #107 – Commuter

  1. Great interaction among the people and the lights. A lot going on in such a few lines. I really like this.

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